need help!! listen and comment

[CDBS14]

Hope you guys hear it. My friend from school whom we decided to make him rap just to like hear him. And well this came out. Let me know what you guys think, if you like it please spread the word around, he has 3 other songs i will upload them soon, or if you want contact me on AIM and i will let you have them.

 

http://www.supload.com/listen?s=nY2rJn

[CDBS14]

what do you guys think?

[Neoblackhound]

Its ok...im not really into it. Try your own beats.

[[PAs] Big-mike226]

not bad should change beats to more of a hardcore beat

[CDBS14]

its not me, lol. This was his first song, he actually did it as a sort of joke. I will post his other songs up, they got more hardcore beats though.

[Neoblackhound]

CDBS14 ]

its not me' date=' lol. This was his first song, he actually did it as a sort of joke. I will post his other songs up, they got more hardcore beats though.

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I never said it was you. I said you should use your own beats.

[CDBS14]

Neoblackhound ]

CDBS14 ]

its not me' date=' lol. This was his first song, he actually did it as a sort of joke. I will post his other songs up, they got more hardcore beats though.

[/quote']

I never said it was you. I said you should use your own beats.

 

yea, but he doesnt have a program that can do that :/

[Neoblackhound]

CDBS14 ]

Neoblackhound ]

CDBS14 ]

its not me' date=' lol. This was his first song, he actually did it as a sort of joke. I will post his other songs up, they got more hardcore beats though.

[/quote']

I never said it was you. I said you should use your own beats.

 

yea, but he doesnt have a program that can do that :/

Well use the schools, im sure your school has a class for it. My school did but then again we had MACs lol.

[CDBS14]

Neoblackhound ]

CDBS14 ]

Neoblackhound ]

CDBS14 ]

its not me' date=' lol. This was his first song, he actually did it as a sort of joke. I will post his other songs up, they got more hardcore beats though.

[/quote']

I never said it was you. I said you should use your own beats.

 

yea, but he doesnt have a program that can do that :/

Well use the schools, im sure your school has a class for it. My school did but then again we had MACs lol.

 

we dont :-\

 

Our school is known for its super math and science classes, we have DELLs, lol.

[CDBS14]

These are his other 3 songs

 

http://www.supload.com/listen?s=k9EZjJ

 

http://www.supload.com/listen?s=R6YeOC

 

http://www.supload.com/listen?s=RegEBq

[Neoblackhound]

Darn well your school sux lol.

[[THM]Lexaeus]

keep his day job.

[BigMoneyNacku]

Lexaeus ]

keep his day job.

 

I gotta agree with the horsey dude. Yer friend needs some work. He sounds like every run of the mill rapper, except he doesn't have much flava. Also tell him, yer not supposed to hear him taking breaths on the mic.

[Nikastylez]

Don't know... the way rap is going now a days, you have to rap about lollipops or something to get any airplay. His rap is too thuggish for the radios. He needs to rap about eating an apple or something ;D