constructive criticism please

[Guest [+30]PuddyTat]

made for a clan member...

 

[Guest OMNI]

the way it peels up in the corner is cool.....nice work man

 

 

-Omni

[Epidemic]

I think it looks good but the color of the +30 color and the color on the font for the sig itself doesn't mesh...

[Guest Damstr8]

I like it, but I know there is a way in flash to make the turn page move only when you go over it with a mouse. I can't remember how it is done, but have seen it.

 

But it does look good.

[Guest [+30]PuddyTat]

_Reaper. ]

I think it looks good but the color of the +30 color and the color on the font for the sig itself doesn't mesh...

 

thats what i kinda wanted, to make it look like under the sig was something totally different than what was on it, but thanks for the info

 

and i know nothing about flash, if i could make it roll up that would kick ass!!!

[Guest Damstr8]

TAT I will see if I can find you a tutorial on it.

[Guest Skipper]

He must work out!

 

[Guest KingJunk]

Pardon my words but YOU ARE A FUCKING BEAST AT MAKING SIG's!!

 

I ohh so Still Thank you very much for this SIG you made me I wanted to use it on other sites but they said I was advetiseing UF and they removed it LoL

 

Thanks again for my sig man I still Love it very much!!

[Deadcity]

Its a cool effect, it looks like a sticker though, not so much a forum sig. It is orgional so I kinda like it anyways.

[DK_MaluNYMets]

_Reaper. ]

I think it looks good but the color of the +30 color and the color on the font for the sig itself doesn't mesh...

 

Yeah i agree with him.. if it was like Dark red with some black backround... i think it would look amazing!

[Chili327]

IMO, i would make a sig border, that it is peeling away from. & yes the text in the sig needs some work, but very cool idea.!

[Guest [iLL] Andawg]

The peeling up part looks like a giant white penis, if you look where it lines up too. Very funny!

[-Wu-WreakHavok]

hmm must of removed it, I cant see it

 

[V1P3R_1]

Andawg ]

The peeling up part looks like a giant white penis, if you look where it lines up too. Very funny!

 

Andawg, just when I thought you were one of the normal ones......calling Dr. Freud...calling Dr.Freud. I mean, by a a show of hands...did anybody else think that it looked like a "giant white penis"? lol

[Guest [+30]PuddyTat]

so going with what everyone had to say, and trying to pull andawgs mind out of the gutter, this is what i came up with...

 

[Guest KingJunk]

Well done............ well done!

[Guest [iLL] Andawg]

Shame on you VIP3R for acusing me of being "normal!" "GOSH!"

 

Nice changes, Tat. But you have to remember the gutter is aiming high for where my mind hangs out.

[Chili327]

X_VIP3R_X ]

Andawg ]

  The peeling up part looks like a giant white penis, if you look where it lines up too. Very funny!

 

Andawg, just when I thought you were one of the normal ones......calling Dr. Freud...calling Dr.Freud. I mean, by a a show of hands...did anybody else think that it looked like a "giant white penis"? lol

Honestly.. I dont get it at all..!?

I went back & tried to lok at it like that, but i just dont see anything at all resembling a big white dick..!?

 

if i squint my eyes i might see an ice cream cone or something cone like, but a dick..!? not at all..

 

 

And now on to the new version (less dick like i guess ..lol)

It looks cool, but the text needs to pop better.

Try a white border on the text or leave the red, & make the text white. (just suggestions..)

[GOAT]

I think it looks like to giant boobs on a blond while she is bouncing on a trampoline......

 

 

Wait hold on a sec.. let me close this magazine.. Oh the sig? yea it looks great! LOL.

 

nice job bud.

 

 

p.s. Andawg..

 

I finally got around to fixing the shadow line on your sig... here ya go bro.

 

http://www.avcbiz.com/Temp1/Andawg.png

[Guest NEO-X]

Tat..

 

My critique is about the font.. other than that it looks great

 

You should have a font that is more closely tied to the them.. i.e. 300 is a rather bloody movie, and as such.. the font you have doesnt really flow IMO with the image itself...

 

try going with a broken looking font

 

like this one - its a bit broken, and somewhat blocky... there are ones that fit better this is just an ex.

 

http://dafont.com/feast-of-flesh-bb.font

 

 

http://dafont.com/img/charmap/f/e/feast_of_flesh_bb0.png

[DK_MaluNYMets]

Chili-Palmer ]

X_VIP3R_X ]

Andawg ]

The peeling up part looks like a giant white penis' date=' if you look where it lines up too. Very funny!

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Andawg, just when I thought you were one of the normal ones......calling Dr. Freud...calling Dr.Freud. I mean, by a a show of hands...did anybody else think that it looked like a "giant white penis"? lol

Honestly.. I dont get it at all..!?

I went back & tried to lok at it like that, but i just dont see anything at all resembling a big white dick..!?

 

if i squint my eyes i might see an ice cream cone or something cone like, but a dick..!? not at all..

 

 

And now on to the new version (less dick like i guess ..lol)

It looks cool, but the text needs to pop better.

Try a white border on the text or leave the red, & make the text white. (just suggestions..)

 

 

I agree with Chili.. i dont get how that ressembles a Penis LOL

[xREVERENDx]

Good shit as usual, puddy.